The Girl in the Red Dress

  • A villanelle is a French verse form in nineteen lines that follows a specific pattern of two rhymes and an alternating refrain.
I stay searching for the girl in the red dress 
With wounded beauty – wings clipped – she flew
Oh, why could I not see the cause of her distress? 

On her soft hands, a vermillion gash tainting her caress
With wavering strength – a tumble – yet how graceful too
I stay searching for the girl in the red dress 

A leaf – a twig – craving her touch, clinging on any tress
With quivering lips – stained perhaps? – a crimson hue
Oh, why could I not see the cause of her distress? 

A weight I saw, her frail shoulders collapsed in duress
With bright watering eyes – a tint of red – tears soaked through
I stay searching for the girl in the red dress 

White as the moon, pale with fear – the ghost of an empress
With crumbling pride – chin up – was it a knife she rued?
Oh, why could I not see the cause of her distress? 

I felt her pain pierce my soul. I didn’t help, I confess!
Don’t look at me, friends, a shell of a man stands before you
I stay searching for the girl in the red dress 
Oh, why could I not see the cause of her distress?

Vrinda Gupta is a graduating senior at Pembroke Pines Charter High School who loves any and all things to do with music, literature, and Rubik’s Cubes.


Published by theatala

the atala is designed, curated, & edited by the Pines Charter Chapter of the National English Honor Society. It showcases original student poetry, fiction, creative nonfiction, literary criticism, and art. Like its namesake — the small, bright butterfly that grew from near extinction to rising numbers in our part of the world — this little literary journal aims to grow our love of writing and expand our community’s appreciation for the literary arts.

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